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I had a dream about you by RaysRays I had a dream about you by RaysRays
and you knew who I was, you recognized me, you noticed me~
and I was to shy to say anything~
Your eyes are really pretty but I just cant meet them~
they're blue like the water around these beaches~
I wake up and I can feel my heated cheeks~
just like, the way I've been looking for you these past weeks~
What will, I say if I ever, see you, again~
I'd probably, just stand there, and stutter like an idiot~
Let me dream about you every night, so I'll always have you in my sight~ <3

These things here ~ they are super fun to type out okay
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they remind me of waves~ UGH THIS PIC WONT UPLOAD WHYYYYWHYWHYWHYY okay it's working. Slow but steady. So anyway, this has been sitting around my unfinished work for a while now and I just decided to get it finished before the next joinme whichmaynotevenbetoday X.X AH I just got reminded of my hometown and I just remember how much I hate this place unu what was I putting here. OH I was listening to two songs while making this: [link] and [link] exact videos I was watching, feel blessed~ I know that light probably doesn't have that many dots of something in the glare but just let me have my fun.

I'm still in my pjs~~~~ :iconregretnothingplz:

art & Mini Rays (c) *Raysblayde

iluMiki<3

My wallpaper was all dark and crap a few seconds ago
now it's all bright MIND=BLOWN

have your fun critiquing if you must pro
I put that button there just for you

working on shad's ref now~






GOOD LORD ITS FINALLY DONE
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Critique by Dorothy11175 Dec 23, 2012, 12:03:13 AM
AMG I FOUND A CRITIQUE BUTTON~ I know it's cuz you put it there lD
Well I know that you said that you already know that the sun doesn't produce that much glare in eyes, but I have to say it anyway. The sun doesn't produce that much glare onto eyes.
olookasignature~
Under the eye, I think I'm seeing a tear. Is that what I'm seeing? I can't say for sure, because it's gray and had red/pink stripes.
Hmm.. While the shading is quite well done, I do notice a couple flaws. On the back fins, there seems to be not enough shading, and after the first tube (on part of the body), I notice on the back (on the yellow) that you snuck in a bit of erasing in there. While I am sure it was intentional, I'm also sure it is incorrect. But I could be wrong. I see other shading mistakes, like on the tail fin, on the secondtube fins, on the earthingies, on the arm(s), on the neck. But I am just too lazy to spell out exactly what they are for yeh~
Now, I also find myself looking at dem clouds. I can't say exactly how they're supposed to be like at this perspective, as I do not really know myself, but I'm not entirely sure that that's it. Don't mind that comment if I am wrong.
But in all honesty I can hardly peel my eyes away from this picture. It's so beautiful, even though there are mistakes. Everybody makes mistakes. Except for Jesus Christ and Heavenly Father, of course.
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:iconmastermitosi:
MasterMitosi Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
D'AWW!
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:iconraysrays:
RaysRays Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
X3
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:iconmastermitosi:
MasterMitosi Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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:iconlunanightsky:
LunaNightSky Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh gawd your reminding me of why I love Rayquaza so much :D
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:iconraysrays:
RaysRays Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Yess, Rayquaza is epic~ :love:
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:iconlunanightsky:
LunaNightSky Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yes :D
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:iconpokemage7:
pokemage7 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
OMHFG THIS IS AMAZING RAYS I LOVE IT.
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:iconraysrays:
RaysRays Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
AHH THANK SO MUCH MAN <3
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:iconaltaeyyr:
Altaeyyr Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Such pretty fluffy clouds~ Like cotton swabs...
DAT GLARE! You must show me how to do this!
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Mini has such pretty aqua accents. This is lovely, Rays. Do it again!~ :heart:
:hug:
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RaysRays Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
afasfasd thankyouuu dem evil cloudses took a bit :stare:
Teh glare was easy, stab on a few dots and lower the opacity!~

It's her 'dreamy' state :lol: I think I will with the cloudses and sky for a bday pic~ :tighthug:
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